Sunday, 1 May 2011

Script alteration (voice over on phone)

Phone ringing

Man 1
: John? John are you there?

Man 2: yeah yeah I'm here whats wrong?

Man 1: She knows john! she knows everything, she's gonna' do something!

Man 2: Wait, what? calm down, Whats happened?

Man 1: She knows john, she know about the plan about everything! she's left and taken

           everything with her!

Man 2: How? how does she know?

Man 1: I don't know! But I need you to find people, to tell everyone search the stations,

           the car parks everywhere!

Man 2: Okay, calm down I'll make some calls

Man 1: We need to keep this a secret, let no one find out, okay?

Man 2: Yes, okay, I'll be in touch

Man 1: She's going to kill everyone.

Phone goes dead


This is the scripted dialogue for what will be heard over the third part of the introduction in the basement, as well as this there will be light non-diegetic music playing to create an eerie and panicky mood as the male character becomes more and more restless in his situation. We changed this as we thought that it would link more with the idea for the rest of the film, as well as introducing more characters which builds a stronger more believable plot.

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